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[Incident:111a]

With "Incident:111a," Krinkels does it again and creates a super-entertaining cartoon.

I can't wait for the rest, man. I've always been a huge fan, though this one fell a bit on the short side. Would like to see longer ones later on.

The music is amazing and whoa what is that creature.

[THE ORIGIN OF DUBSTEP]

This is awesome and original, the kind of stuff that is SAVING Newgrounds. 5/5

[Teens' Adventure Ep. 1]

There are a number of frightening facts about "Teens' Adventure Ep. 1" that I absolutely must make public. A whopping 95% of all of the characters have been traced from the actual show, and thus, isn't your own artwork. You were too lazy to try to render these characters in your own style if you even have one, which deals a damaging blow to the overall quality of this flash. Do not give me any of that "I drew the backgrounds though" tripe, because the backgrounds were just as bland, and made the whole cartoon unappealing to look at because of the bad color scheme.

You do not have a natural knack for writing, because nobody has an individual personality and nobody ever has anything funny or interesting to say, and your attempts at trying to be funny are bad. Consider getting another writer, because writing of this quality is absolutely inexcusable. Your inability to script funny or interesting scenarios mirrors your own inability to be funny or interesting, and that is something that is improved and developed over time.

I will never understand why you chose 6teen and Stoked of all shows, because they are both absolutely terrible, and I have an increasingly difficult time trying to imagine that anybody at all would like these two shows enough to make fan animations for them.

Your unwillingness to improve as an artist without ripping off of somebody else in the process is what really kills your cartoon. You always spit out the same terrible excuse that you're not a good artist and thus, you trace the characters. Hey genius, here's an idea. Practice. And don't practice with Squishables. Those don't help.

The animation is very, very stiff.

Boring. Lifeless. 0.

[Sq.E # 5 - Senior Prom #1]

At least you actually drew the characters yourself, or at least I hope you did. That's the only reason I'm giving you half a star.

This series, like your Teens' Adventure series, still suffers from boring writing. The writing usually does not go beyond everyday stuff (Croissant Day? Mismatch Day? Really now?) and this could have been interesting, and there were so many things you could have done with this plot, but didn't. You re-use the same story multiple times with only slight modifications, and the story you use over and over again is not very interesting, at all.

Honestly if you have trouble being original, then animation is not for you. Even this episode was based on an event in your school, obviously the permission slip comes from there too. Practice drawing your characters on-model, one minute Lubch's thin then the next minute he's back to normal. If you don't even put in the effort into making your main character look right, then that's just pure laziness there.

I'm gonna say this as a BRO, painted backgrounds and shading do not cover up your terrible artwork. I know that ever since Misty decided to use painted backgrounds, you decided to rip him off because they look nice, but if you're a bad artist, then the painted backgrounds will make that look even more obvious.

The dialogue is just as awkward as usual, which you have been told countless times but manage to ignore each and every time.

You improved, but only very little.

[Teens' Adventure Ep. 2]

Not very good.

I think you should listen to the people below me, they all know what they're talking about. Something about this flash feels very generic, and cookie-cutter. There doesn't seem to be enough of your style in it, it doesn't really seem like there is even a style. Tracing does help you learn, but if that's all you do, then you won't progress a lot. At least try to draw these characters yourself. Don't take the easy way out.

The story does not go beyond everyday scenarios, and the dialogue is boring, and just plain does not feel right. It makes no sense, and nothing that important happens in this episode. I think you should use your time and effort more wisely. It would be much better if you focused on the several series you already have instead of making yet another one, with no original characters.

Good luck.

TheRealNat23 responds:

Well I didn't trace the backgrounds at all at least, so yeah, I guess I could try and draw stuff myself.

[Joy 1: Misjudgment]

Hey AlmightyHans, you're cool.

[Fill My Black Hole]

I've discovered the meaning of life.

[Fairly OddFortress]

The animation's smooth and the song is pretty funny. More, please :D