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[SqS5S4: Career Connecting]

Pretty cool.

Feels like a real commercial. Only downside is, it looked like everything was skewed. But overall, the colors were nice.

TheRealNat23 responds:

Thanks.

[Willie D Comics]

Yesss, good show Willie, jolly good show!

RogersEntertainment responds:

Wow thanks

[SqS5S1: Supply List]

YES just what i wanted hooray for lubch, saw this on youtube a while ago, how does this work, does one of your teachers play it in school or something?

TheRealNat23 responds:

Knew that cameo was worth something. Not in real life, no, teachers don't play Lubch, and not even in the 5th Season and beyond.

[SqS5E1: Summer Reading 1]

That was pretty good.

I reluctantly clicked on this expecting the worst but was pleasantly surprised. The character designs were mildly better, still not very good (don't give me that "thats why they're called squishables hurr durr" excuse) but otherwise it was all good.

I like how nothing is copied with the exception of the traced backgrounds, it's all mostly original but you need to start making up your own plotlines instead of relying on your school to copy stories from.

Good job. Squishables > Webdings, Scribbles, RJL Show, etc.

LUBCH CAMEO LUBCH CAMEO

TheRealNat23 responds:

Thanks for the good review! Secret surprise in PM. I'll try to see IF I can fit in a Lubch cameo. Believe it or not, the couch and the table in the first scene with Whestlo (not the Character Introduction scene) wasn't traced, just referenced to. I hope to be this good! Also, an edited version might eventually come with less mistakes (like the "s" missing in House at one point). Once again, thanks!

[Mean Paul The Movie 2]

That was nice, and entertaining.

Good job man. Too short, but I'm sure you already know that ;)

meanpaul responds:

Yeah, thanks a lot! :)

[W.E#3 - Pivot Webdings]

I'm giving this a higher score than your other stuff since it's at least better than "Webdings Crossing."

Nat, this is not funny. Characters that fall in holes is not humorous at all. That's like most of this episode. I appreciate that you at least TRIED with Squishables, but this seems effortless.

Good luck.

TheRealNat23 responds:

Thanks for the honest review, I either won't do that hole thing again or won't do it much at all.

[Teens' Adventure Ep. 2]

Not very good.

I think you should listen to the people below me, they all know what they're talking about. Something about this flash feels very generic, and cookie-cutter. There doesn't seem to be enough of your style in it, it doesn't really seem like there is even a style. Tracing does help you learn, but if that's all you do, then you won't progress a lot. At least try to draw these characters yourself. Don't take the easy way out.

The story does not go beyond everyday scenarios, and the dialogue is boring, and just plain does not feel right. It makes no sense, and nothing that important happens in this episode. I think you should use your time and effort more wisely. It would be much better if you focused on the several series you already have instead of making yet another one, with no original characters.

Good luck.

TheRealNat23 responds:

Well I didn't trace the backgrounds at all at least, so yeah, I guess I could try and draw stuff myself.