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2013-07-22 23:01:18

With "Incident:111a," Krinkels does it again and creates a super-entertaining cartoon.

I can't wait for the rest, man. I've always been a huge fan, though this one fell a bit on the short side. Would like to see longer ones later on.

The music is amazing and whoa what is that creature.

THE ORIGIN OF DUBSTEP

2013-07-22 22:58:31

This is awesome and original, the kind of stuff that is SAVING Newgrounds. 5/5

Sq.E # 5 - Senior Prom #1

2013-07-15 13:53:48

At least you actually drew the characters yourself, or at least I hope you did. That's the only reason I'm giving you half a star.

This series, like your Teens' Adventure series, still suffers from boring writing. The writing usually does not go beyond everyday stuff (Croissant Day? Mismatch Day? Really now?) and this could have been interesting, and there were so many things you could have done with this plot, but didn't. You re-use the same story multiple times with only slight modifications, and the story you use over and over again is not very interesting, at all.

Honestly if you have trouble being original, then animation is not for you. Even this episode was based on an event in your school, obviously the permission slip comes from there too. Practice drawing your characters on-model, one minute Lubch's thin then the next minute he's back to normal. If you don't even put in the effort into making your main character look right, then that's just pure laziness there.

I'm gonna say this as a BRO, painted backgrounds and shading do not cover up your terrible artwork. I know that ever since Misty decided to use painted backgrounds, you decided to rip him off because they look nice, but if you're a bad artist, then the painted backgrounds will make that look even more obvious.

The dialogue is just as awkward as usual, which you have been told countless times but manage to ignore each and every time.

You improved, but only very little.

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